The Heavy Black Banana Got Jumped On
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On one sunny Monday afternoon, during lunch time, people were running on the pathway. They were running fast and feeling hot. While running to the shop to buy ice cream, they stepped on the banana.The people were heavy and the banana was sad because they damaged it’s peel. The banana was crying with black tears.There was also a little girl jumping up and down.She was wearing a bright pink dress.She had a rainbow bow in her hair and a charm bracelet on her wrist. Someone picked up the heavy banana and it was still crying hard.
Reflection
It was a hard challenge because at first I didn't understand. It was very hard. I'm very pleased I got it done because I got to put a photo in it.
On one sunny Monday afternoon, during lunch time, people were running on the pathway. They were running fast and feeling hot. While running to the shop to buy ice cream, they stepped on the banana.The people were heavy and the banana was sad because they damaged it’s peel. The banana was crying with black tears.There was also a little girl jumping up and down.She was wearing a bright pink dress.She had a rainbow bow in her hair and a charm bracelet on her wrist. Someone picked up the heavy banana and it was still crying hard.Reflection
It was a hard challenge because at first I didn't understand. It was very hard. I'm very pleased I got it done because I got to put a photo in it.
Kia ora Candesse, you have done a fantastic job of writing your 100 word challenge this week, I could just imagine this happening. I like the way you have chosen a moment in time and just focused on that. Maybe next time you could use add in more adjectives to make your writing even more interesting.
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