I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Candesse, I really your choice of subject for your poem. I can just imagine eating the playdough and tasting the saltiness of it, it is always so colourful but then so salty and gross! I love the background you have chosen, maybe next time you could make the font a little bigger or make it BOLD so it is easier to read. Awesome job!
Kia ora Candesse, I really your choice of subject for your poem. I can just imagine eating the playdough and tasting the saltiness of it, it is always so colourful but then so salty and gross! I love the background you have chosen, maybe next time you could make the font a little bigger or make it BOLD so it is easier to read. Awesome job!
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